Pretty hilarious! The art style reminds me of Eddsworld in a way while being totally original in its own.
Not bad!
Pretty hilarious! The art style reminds me of Eddsworld in a way while being totally original in its own.
Not bad!
When i was a kid he inspired the way i draw.You're right he is one of my biggest insperations :)
And he will be always in our hearts
Thank you
Stiff animation all around, dated graphics but functional.
Definitely improvements can be made!
Thank you for the feedback! The next episode should be better than this one :)
Very nice improvement, the animation style is a little dated but its a nice shift to 60 FPS.
Only thing to add is to include some elements to make it seem a little more spectacular, there were far too many moments where the image was just a black or white background with a sprite animation on top of it, which is a little boring on the eyes. There was just one moment where style seem to fit just well.
Aside from that, not bad!
Thank you for your helpful review! I'll be sure to keep that in mind for future animations I make ^^
You really ought to avoid submitting test animations to the portal.
Aside from that, it's alright. You got a foundation at least.
Yeah, kinda figured that one out the hard way... Thanks non the less! :)
This is so unnecessary but yet I love it so much, lmao. Keep these Glenda vids coming! Such professional quality!
Thank you!
...That was something at least?
The jokes felt really stale and the whole movie was a bit painful to watch. The artwork definitely could've been better.
It's a start.
I agree the first bit is ok but the last bit is bad
but I'm proving those problems in my next one.
Thanks for your Feedback.
It's good... but there's really no entertainment value behind this. I feel like it'll belong better in the animation forums.
I will commend you on the smooth animation though.
Thanks for the feedback.
I will try and make them more watchable in the future and I will differelty be adding more colour into them as well.
It's really well made, but this sort of stuff should belong in the animation forums. Test animations don't really sit well here in the portal, plus you won't get the greatest of feedback compared to submitting it at the forums.
Still impressive regardless!
Oh thanks for letting me know! I dont use ng too often so idk how much of the stuff works XD
An interesting style... but the voices and the stale jokes behind it just really brings it down. I'll admit, there were some gags that were pretty witty though.
The transitions in between can get annoying really fast though, and I'd avoid using the word "random" anywhere in your videos.
Thank you for your critique! I am going to try to implement your points into my videos.
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