Too short, not enough substance to be an decent animation.
Too short, not enough substance to be an decent animation.
This is my first ever animation so i was just testing it out. the program kept crashing so i had to make it 2 parts. I appreciate the criticism, ill try to make more substantial ones or edit the parts together until i can get a better computer to work with. The second part is just called DYLM if you want to see where this was going
It's "Aeris" or "Aerith" whatever.
Pretty impressive work here!
Oh whoops. I'll see if I can fix it. Thank you for the kind words
This isn't the place to test your animations. You're better off submitting this at the Animation forums here.
You don't want to be known for making halfassed movies, do you?
alright i'll do that
Interesting preview, the animation feels like a mix of western shows and anime in a way, a interesting mix. Voices seems okay.
Love to see more.
Thanks for the review :) glad you're interested and there is more to see
Well, that was something! It had some charm.
Lol.. Yeah😊 thanks for responding by the way😊
Really dated graphics all around, but it was at least charming.
Watching it on Newgrounds, I myself certainly get an 'aged' feeling about it (though perhaps in a different way than you). I cannot seem to upload to the resolution I intend these projects to be viewed in. Youtube and such seem to do it just fine but here it really wants to restrict me. Not entirely sure how I can fix that.
What is that attitude in the description? The movie felt dull, everything else was okay but it was just dull.
There's little to no entertainment value here, if we're being honest.
Heeey there ! thanks a lot for your honest opinion
Can you tell me how i can make more entertaining ?
Does it come down to the story itself ? or how it was performed ?
English please.
im not from english im from polish
Just a suggestion, change the rating. The profanity certainly isn't family friendly. :)
You're right, thought I put it at a higher rating actually. I'll do that
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